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I Need Light
Black as night
into the darkness
pulling them in
how can they see
what's really in me
with no light
just my madness
how can they see
how can I see
the real me.
into the darkness
pulling them in
how can they see
what's really in me
with no light
just my madness
how can they see
how can I see
the real me.
Published 10th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
10th Aug 2013 2:01pm
Concise but complete
A sad but good read
Kitty
A sad but good read
Kitty
10th Aug 2013 4:58pm
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21st Aug 2013 2:15pm
Who needs the light when they can see it through your truthful ink? Nicely done...
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