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Haiku XXXI
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Haiku XXXI
I looked for you -
all I found was a mirror
with a hairline crack
Written by
jagracia
Published
8th Aug 2013
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Re: Haiku XXXI
dartford
(Paul S...)
8th Aug 2013 1:57am
Sometimes I love to
not fully understand,
it leaves so many
possibilities...
It's a great picture,
or reflection, tho...
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re: Re: Haiku XXXI
jagracia
- Edited 8th Aug 2013 2:31am
8th Aug 2013 2:28am
It is a bit esoteric but you may parse its meaning.
Even I am a bit nonplussed. My subconscious
wrote this one. I am chuffed that it gave
you pause.
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Re: Haiku XXXI
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
- Edited 8th Aug 2013 8:13am
8th Aug 2013 8:12am
Your subconcious is an expert co-writer :-). Must be the painter in you. Great image, J.! And so much space left to let the mind wander. A perfect start into the day I'd say.
Chi
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re: Re: Haiku XXXI
jagracia
8th Aug 2013 2:46pm
a little wandering is good for the soul. Thanks.
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Re: Haiku XXXI
Anonymous
8th Aug 2013 4:32pm
We all seem to have those cracks,
some just bigger than the others...lol
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re: Re: Haiku XXXI
jagracia
8th Aug 2013 5:08pm
You got that right; and hopefully the cracks are narrow enough to leap over.
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Re: Haiku XXXI
Sterling7147
(__)
8th Aug 2013 5:25pm
wonderful :)
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re: Re: Haiku XXXI
jagracia
8th Aug 2013 6:36pm
thanks for reading.
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