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It's How I'm Your's
it's how
from the moment your mind
had kidnapped mine
and took me to a place
only Shakespeare wrote of
and how
you raised the dead language
my heart spoke with
and pronounced every word
with fluent precision
it's how
you are a poem penned
a peerless piece
only words of the soul
gained from lifetimes with you
and how
you're my favorite place
my great escape
like a backyard hammock
embraced and supported
it's how
our long conversations
fill the empty
and your soulful kisses
tell me to trust your lips
and how
each time our tongues collide
and our lips touch
I can taste our future
a hundred years we're still
it's how
your laughter low and warm
calms my crazy
lights me like candlelight
replenishes my soul
and how
you're more than my best friend
or my soul mate
you are my musician
always ticking inside
it's how
each time I see you smile
or hear you speak
you conduct a rhythm
only my heart can play
and how
my heart is the base line
your voice the song
you serenade my soul
the vibration melts me
I'm yours
from the moment your mind
had kidnapped mine
and took me to a place
only Shakespeare wrote of
and how
you raised the dead language
my heart spoke with
and pronounced every word
with fluent precision
it's how
you are a poem penned
a peerless piece
only words of the soul
gained from lifetimes with you
and how
you're my favorite place
my great escape
like a backyard hammock
embraced and supported
it's how
our long conversations
fill the empty
and your soulful kisses
tell me to trust your lips
and how
each time our tongues collide
and our lips touch
I can taste our future
a hundred years we're still
it's how
your laughter low and warm
calms my crazy
lights me like candlelight
replenishes my soul
and how
you're more than my best friend
or my soul mate
you are my musician
always ticking inside
it's how
each time I see you smile
or hear you speak
you conduct a rhythm
only my heart can play
and how
my heart is the base line
your voice the song
you serenade my soul
the vibration melts me
I'm yours
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Re: It's How I'm Your's
6th Aug 2013 10:12am
Such a beautiful thing that two wonderful people share.
A captivating write Rachel.
A captivating write Rachel.
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7th Aug 2013 4:05am
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 11:12am
classic rachel o....thanks
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7th Aug 2013 4:06am
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Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 1:05pm
a lovely testament Rachel, I envy this guy whose embrace supports like a backyard hammock...Nice!
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7th Aug 2013 4:09am
Re: It's How I'm Your's
6th Aug 2013 1:44pm
Lovely poem Rachel. Good imagery. Nice to see you doing some writing again.
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7th Aug 2013 4:13am
Re: It's How I'm Your's
6th Aug 2013 6:53pm
Goodness! This piece is simply Stunning, Rachel!
Tender love defined beautifully! Your open stanza with the Shakespeare line was witty, but I truly loved;
"you're my favorite place
my great escape
like a backyard hammock
embraced and supported"
Enjoyed! Xo
Tender love defined beautifully! Your open stanza with the Shakespeare line was witty, but I truly loved;
"you're my favorite place
my great escape
like a backyard hammock
embraced and supported"
Enjoyed! Xo
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re: Re: It's How I'm Your's
7th Aug 2013 4:14am
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6th Aug 2013 7:39pm
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7th Aug 2013 4:15am
Re: It's How I'm Your's
It's how our long conversations fill the empty and your soulful kisses tell me to trust your lips.
You made me put aside my own bitterness for a moment and briefly feel those emotions again. Great write, enjoyed reading it. :)
You made me put aside my own bitterness for a moment and briefly feel those emotions again. Great write, enjoyed reading it. :)
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re: Re: It's How I'm Your's
7th Aug 2013 4:19am
Anytime a writer is told that they were able to suck a reader into the emotions of their words is an enormous compliment. Thank you. <3
Re: It's How I'm Your's
8th Aug 2013 11:58am
It will now be impossible to read anything about a classic love story and not think about this wonderful write!
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re: Re: It's How I'm Your's
8th Aug 2013 10:05pm
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9th Aug 2013 1:22am
You've ventured well past "smelling colors" as these words of life attest. I would sing this Shakespearean song if I had a pleasing voice :P
I never presume a poem to be birthed from a writers experience, yet you craft these truths and sculpt such a beauty filled vision of how love can be. Thank you for giving such grand hope!
I never presume a poem to be birthed from a writers experience, yet you craft these truths and sculpt such a beauty filled vision of how love can be. Thank you for giving such grand hope!
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re: Re: It's How I'm Your's
10th Aug 2013 2:28am
I think you have to experience love on some scale in order to write about it in it's honesty. It just so happens that I am experiencing it on it's grandest scale and yes, this very special someone has taught me how to smell colors :)
Re: It's How I'm Your's
11th Aug 2013 10:28am
"And how
Each time our tongues collide
And our lips touch
I can taste our future
A hundred years we're still"
Loving this vibe,Rachel.
Keep embracing,growing and enjoying your journey. It gives hope and vision.
Thank you
S:)
Each time our tongues collide
And our lips touch
I can taste our future
A hundred years we're still"
Loving this vibe,Rachel.
Keep embracing,growing and enjoying your journey. It gives hope and vision.
Thank you
S:)
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re: Re: It's How I'm Your's
12th Aug 2013 5:45am
So glad you found something in this, especially hope! Great compliment. Thank you!
Re: It's How I'm Your's
13th Aug 2013 3:06am
Beautiful write Rachel!! Penned like a true master. The picture painted with your words was of true love. Thanks for sharing.
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13th Aug 2013 5:55am
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