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Frozen
Pale winds
blew the sense
of warmth
from amber eyes
while aligning
a starless night
with asphyxiated dreams...
leaving in its wake,
a phantom...
that forevermore
will languish
within a reticent ocean
of frozen tears...
Published 5th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2013 5:18am
Oh, this is so sadly beautiful...
6th Aug 2013 4:23pm
Thought I replied to this :( sorry bout the delay dear lil
kitten... I Thank you sooooo much! :)
kitten... I Thank you sooooo much! :)
5th Aug 2013 5:21am
5th Aug 2013 5:29am
Thank you my sweet one, I'm pleased you thought so n I am forever grateful for ur continued support :)
Anonymous
5th Aug 2013 9:08am
Wonderful expression & flow, Poetikmind. So beautifully inked. Love it! :-)
*Peace* Carlene
*Peace* Carlene
6th Aug 2013 4:25pm
5th Aug 2013 10:19am
6th Aug 2013 4:26pm
Thank u Mia, but it doesn't compare to how deeply n beautifully ur heart bleeds :)
5th Aug 2013 11:09am
6th Aug 2013 4:27pm
5th Aug 2013 5:40pm
This piece strummed the cords of a deep hurt, it rang very true. sadly beautiful Poe.
Red
Red
6th Aug 2013 4:31pm
I guess I was "strumming my pain with my fingers
Singing my life with those words..." Lol
Seriously, thank u my gypsy ! :)
Singing my life with those words..." Lol
Seriously, thank u my gypsy ! :)
6th Aug 2013 3:36pm
7th Aug 2013 12:02pm
Aaawww I love that you did my friend! Truly grateful to have your support as always my sweetness :)
Anonymous
6th Aug 2013 7:28pm
Just lovely...reminds me of a love
that faded....very creative metaphors
you used to describe..enjoyed:)
that faded....very creative metaphors
you used to describe..enjoyed:)
7th Aug 2013 12:14pm
Well you're dead on target my sweetie, that is exactly what it was/is... Thank you for your wonderful comment n your continued support, it's greatly appreciated always! :)
7th Aug 2013 10:26pm
"while aligning
a starless night
with asphyxiated dreams... "
Breathtaking imagery...
a starless night
with asphyxiated dreams... "
Breathtaking imagery...
7th Aug 2013 10:49pm
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