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Nightfall
Night fall
I crawl
to my cold
stiff bed
Thinking
how long
will it take
to rest my
dreamy
head
All alone
again
will I feel
that touch
once more
or is this
my life
forever a
bore
Eyes closed
tight
with thoughts
of a
companion
how romantic
it could be
moon
shining in
on me
lovers touch
kiss on my
naked
shoulders
from his
warm
sweet lips
giving me
his loving
dips
than rest
with him
draping
over me
I crawl
to my cold
stiff bed
Thinking
how long
will it take
to rest my
dreamy
head
All alone
again
will I feel
that touch
once more
or is this
my life
forever a
bore
Eyes closed
tight
with thoughts
of a
companion
how romantic
it could be
moon
shining in
on me
lovers touch
kiss on my
naked
shoulders
from his
warm
sweet lips
giving me
his loving
dips
than rest
with him
draping
over me
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Re: Nightfall
30th Jul 2013 3:32am
your poem is veiled w/serene beauty & a few tears, Tommie. I like the blue shades in the pic...
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Anonymous
30th Jul 2013 3:48am
Such longing in this write tl....
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Anonymous
30th Jul 2013 4:36am
A well painted love scene! I love the shoulder part...shoulders are so sexy! Well done Tommie :)
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