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Haiku XXVIII

as I lay dying
my entire life in review
starless night above

Written by jagracia

Published 29th Jul 2013

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Re: Haiku XXVIII

29th Jul 2013 5:40pm

That could be one from Basho, couldn't it? Full of hidden secrets and beauty. You're extremely good at haikus!
Chi

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- Edited 29th Jul 2013 5:47pm

29th Jul 2013 5:46pm

I would be honored to be within a 10,000 words of Basho (or Chiyo). thank you.

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Re: Haiku XXVIII

29th Jul 2013 8:36pm

Oh I think you're closer
than you think...

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29th Jul 2013 9:27pm

Closer to Basho or to dying? ;)

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