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Anonymous
28th Jul 2013 00:40am
The vain moon in a human world......
28th Jul 2013 00:41am
29th Jul 2013 5:34pm
Poetic, J. But no need to pity someone as long as he or she believes his or her light's real. At least someone's happy. Fine haiku!
Chi
Chi
29th Jul 2013 5:43pm
29th Jul 2013 5:44pm
But not always unhealthy either :-). As long as it's the moon we're talking about ...
29th Jul 2013 10:21pm
LOVE this haiku J!
I like the way you add a true feeling
to the observation....
I like the way you add a true feeling
to the observation....
29th Jul 2013 10:25pm
