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Haiku Love
He loves like no other
his words touch my heart
as lovers we combust
I tell him what I want
he blushes in thought
it's heavenly torture
Tangled limbs are one
our bodies belong
love has no sight
Sunshine streams in
through pink petals
racing hearts ignite
Clouds dance along air
on tip toes I stand
and wait for his lips
his words touch my heart
as lovers we combust
I tell him what I want
he blushes in thought
it's heavenly torture
Tangled limbs are one
our bodies belong
love has no sight
Sunshine streams in
through pink petals
racing hearts ignite
Clouds dance along air
on tip toes I stand
and wait for his lips
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Re: Haiku Love
Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 11:35pm
Most excellent my talented, yet overqualified, friend! These two are extra yummy:
"Tangled limbs are one
our bodies belong
love has no sight
Sunshine streams in
through pink petals
racing hearts ignite"
"Tangled limbs are one
our bodies belong
love has no sight
Sunshine streams in
through pink petals
racing hearts ignite"
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27th Jul 2013 11:44pm
Re: Haiku Love
Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 11:44pm
well done haiku tl...not easy to do.
strider...
strider...
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27th Jul 2013 11:48pm
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29th Jul 2013 3:51pm
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29th Jul 2013 4:25pm
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29th Jul 2013 11:49pm
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30th Jul 2013 1:02am
Re: Haiku Love
Anonymous
12th Sep 2013 1:53am
Oh I'm sure their coming
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