Haiku XIII

There's nothing sadder than the realisation of the end. Beautiful haiku.

Thanks, J.! You were too fast :-), I was about to modify it ... DUP was down for a moment so I had to wait. Hm ... What do I do? I modify and hope you cling to your comment. Or tell me when it's worse than before :-). Am a little undecided with it.

Just repost it as a variation and let your audience give you feedback on the version they prefer

Thanks for the hint but I prefer the update version :-).

Im very curious to see your update version!!!
(or have you edited this and its the final one?)
However,Chiyo, your Haiku skills are superb!

This already IS the update version :-). I was a bit fast in publishing it and later on had a more fitting suggestion as a second line. Thank you, Mourganna for the read and your lovely compliment!

Much wisdom, here, Iris. Thought provoking, well-written haiku, & enjoyable read... as always! :)

*Peace* Carlene

Thanks for considering this haiku as thought provoking and wise, Carlene. I feel deeply honored. It only picture my experience in life ...