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Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 2:14am
re: Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 2:20am
Thank you so much D! Decadent is as it should be lol glad you enjoyed.
Red
Red
Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 3:19am
Helluva party red...I can be a bouncer!
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re: Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 3:48am
Hey what floats your boat man hahaha even the bouncers get in on the fun!Thanks!
Red
Red
Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 4:01am
delicious...i admit..it would be ...hard...to play the role of voyeur within a scenery such as this...I would humbly request admittance of my phallic tendencies into this ocean of ecstasy...lovely one Red...
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re: Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 4:45am
Well actually I kinda figured you to be one stage players :-) RSVP and we shall see... Thanks Naaj lol glad it got your juices going lol.
Red
Red
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Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 6:08am
enticing no doubt...let me pull myself together..consider this my RSVP..
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27th Jul 2013 1:04pm
Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 5:05am
A very enjoyable read. The only challenge was at points with the colors used it was hard to make out letters of words.
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re: Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 1:06pm
Got ya Jazzy, I will work on it some more and see if I can't get it to where it is easier to read. Thanks for stopping by.
Red
Red
re: re: Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 2:59pm
Wasn't a problem until like the 5th stanza where the background goes from being dark black to much lighter, which is closer to the color of the type.
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Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 5:15am
Always hoopla going on around here-Party animal--and a Wonderful time it is-Excellent Red!!!
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re: Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 1:09pm
Well you know how I do it hehehe I'm not called Gypsy Red for nothing. Let's party!
Red
Red
Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 9:12am
Hot write Gypsy, all the smoke will set the sprinklers off. Lol. I will be the drinks waitress. :) Great piece dear.
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re: Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 1:11pm
Pisst watch out for the bouncer he likes to pinch the waitresses on bum lol lol
Thanks Magda! If the sprinklers go off we will get wet and wild then!!!!
Red
Thanks Magda! If the sprinklers go off we will get wet and wild then!!!!
Red
Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 1:24pm
I echo everyone else, Red..simply captivating, as always :-) lovely work
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re: Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 1:54pm
Thanks Miki, something a little risque to shake-um up lol make sure everyone's awake lol
Red
Red
Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
27th Jul 2013 5:03pm
re: Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
7th Aug 2013 4:42pm
Hahaha Grace is that the hotty in you I see?!! lol Thanks beautiful I appreciate the luv!
Red
Red
Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
29th Jul 2013 5:59pm
re: Re: Masquerade Erotique Carnal
29th Jul 2013 6:18pm
Hey there nature boy nice to see you!!!Thanks for stopping by to read!
Red
Red