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Unseen
How the unseen reaches up
to grasp at dangling limbs,
to caress unblemished thighs,
warm flesh, lightly browned
by the South American sun.
So much to see and feel
before time takes it away:
Lift up that pretty French dress
to grasp at dangling limbs,
to caress unblemished thighs,
warm flesh, lightly browned
by the South American sun.
So much to see and feel
before time takes it away:
Lift up that pretty French dress
Published 26th Jul 2013
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26th Jul 2013 11:57pm
before time takes it away
was pretty much one of
the main themes running
thru Mr Shakespeare's
sonnets, wasn't it? A
lovely poem..
was pretty much one of
the main themes running
thru Mr Shakespeare's
sonnets, wasn't it? A
lovely poem..
I wrote this poem about ten years ago, but don't remember the inspiration.
The Bard, though, has inspired poets for 400 years. Perhaps you
were thinking of his Sonnet 54 or 60?
The Bard, though, has inspired poets for 400 years. Perhaps you
were thinking of his Sonnet 54 or 60?
27th Jul 2013 11:42am
WOW! From the first line to last a catchy, observational and emotional poem! Inspires me to keep myself engaged with Shakespeare.
Chi
Chi
27th Jul 2013 3:53pm
27th Jul 2013 6:47pm
27th Jul 2013 11:54am
27th Jul 2013 3:53pm
Anonymous
28th Jul 2013 00:19am
Cute, whimsical, playful...the fresh scent
of summer frolicking:)
of summer frolicking:)
28th Jul 2013 00:40am
13th Aug 2013 4:12am
Well if you want something...might as well be blunt about it. LOL!!! Just kidding, I thought this was very sexy. :)
I try to save the sexiness for
that special someone, but
occasionally it just slips out. ;)
You're right though, I am learning
not to hide who I am and if I want something
I will ask. Life is too short to be coy.
that special someone, but
occasionally it just slips out. ;)
You're right though, I am learning
not to hide who I am and if I want something
I will ask. Life is too short to be coy.
13th Aug 2013 4:23am
Glad you shared a little sexiness with us. Very nice. My motto is about asking...if you don't ask you never know. :)
