its an age old saying, but nothings going to change the world

Insightful thoughts.


    Written-out good, Lacey... Pan

a d    ee p[ly]   (meditative)

NoThing

would indeed 'change the world'....

but tis unmarketable,unprofitable,unprophetable,
unsellable,
& Blasphemy to God+Jesus'Kapitalist Advancement of EconomicSystem Royalty exploiting the egos of middleclass to keep Poverty/Suffering&material Delusion as the basis of of Our contrived Reality/Truth/& IBelievisms................

there....i'm glad wee've cleared that up*

-I like this poom-

*(PS)The Government is not greedy --- The FreeEnterprise Industries' Profit-Motives keep a tight, but camouflaged grip on any-thing even remotely related to The Government's Testickles & Teateries, in 'order' to keep the circle of material greed
as the 'only' option. "It's HardWired in Us"... as if it was part of God'sPlan that it be "in Our DNA"

now eye'm even gladder wee've clarified sofcknMuch of What-It-Is, that it's time to go empty my silly old bladder.....spread TheWord!!

Hmmmmm.....maybe....just maybe, now....

I should publish the above as My(next)Poem,
just on
the off-chance
of
changing-the-World.....

waddya think?.......okay, nevermind

its cool, go for it =]

Loove the insight here, this should be a
drawn quote, more people should see it.

Very well written.

that is a very very true statement of things in life. great write

Lacey, this is so profound. I wish I had a cooler word but it really resonates so well in the psyche. And the fact that you don't need volumes of words to get your point across is a testament to your writing skill. The last two stanzas provide an awesome contrast. Terrific work !

RIGHT on,Lacey, I think the only change is from within...this poem makes me think of that story of the tiny little bird, one day a nut falls on his head and he starts the rumor that the world will fall down....do you know that story?
Just blabbing

Wisdom beyond your years right here. Enjoyed this little thought process. Thank you for the read.