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Re: On the Discovery that His Life no Longer Fit
25th Jul 2013 6:59pm
re: Re: On the Discovery that His Life no Longer Fit
25th Jul 2013 7:00pm
Re: On the Discovery that His Life no Longer Fit
26th Jul 2013 10:41am
You have awesome thoughts, J.. And as awesome as your thoughts are your poems. So fitting!
Chi
Chi
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re: Re: On the Discovery that His Life no Longer Fit
26th Jul 2013 2:39pm
I've lost 5 kilos in the last 8 months, so this poem is meant literally and metaphorically.
re: re: Re: On the Discovery that His Life no Longer Fit
26th Jul 2013 8:22pm
:-). Was it on purpose? Or are you also one of those who loose weight when they feel shitty? Sorry, none of my business.
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re: re: re: Re: On the Discovery that His Life no Longer Fit
26th Jul 2013 8:32pm
No, it was on purpose. Feel free to ask me anything. I can always decline to answer. ;)
Re: On the Discovery that His Life no Longer Fit
Anonymous
26th Jul 2013 4:00pm
Powerful, and first thought was strength
to carry on, to endure whatever came
next.
to carry on, to endure whatever came
next.
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re: Re: On the Discovery that His Life no Longer Fit
26th Jul 2013 4:29pm
Thank you. Yes, one can read much into it, depending on one's own experiences.