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A Blue Period
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He fell
into the dream
holding on
with his everything
strings tied
to nimble fingers
bled blue
to tangled tears
apocalyptic raids
as encircled secrets
flew through
the lips kissed
serenade serenade
barrel rolling blind
in kegs
of powdered dynamite
lay blue
and once ignited
he spiraled
flying once again
He fell
into the dream
holding on
with his everything
strings tied
to nimble fingers
bled blue
to tangled tears
apocalyptic raids
as encircled secrets
flew through
the lips kissed
serenade serenade
barrel rolling blind
in kegs
of powdered dynamite
lay blue
and once ignited
he spiraled
flying once again
Published 23rd Jul 2013
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23rd Jul 2013 7:37pm
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2013 8:42pm
excellent flow and tempo and message soul
good luck
strider
good luck
strider
23rd Jul 2013 11:16pm
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23rd Jul 2013 11:19pm
Thank You Dear Magdalena-always worry depths when in slight crypt-speak...
23rd Jul 2013 9:57pm
23rd Jul 2013 11:25pm
:) Thank You so much Dear Red (space and time long past:)-its a colourful day around town:)
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26th Jul 2013 9:09am
Good luck with the competition,
the lips kissed
serenade serenade
barrel rolling blind
in kegs
of powdered dynamite
very well written.
You seem to be distinguishing and holding your
own style of writing. Wonderful, wonderful.
the lips kissed
serenade serenade
barrel rolling blind
in kegs
of powdered dynamite
very well written.
You seem to be distinguishing and holding your
own style of writing. Wonderful, wonderful.
26th Jul 2013 4:19pm
