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Erotic Poems
Haiku XIV
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Haiku XIV
I took you that way
just the way you taught me to
in exhausted bliss
Written by
jagracia
Published
23rd Jul 2013
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Re: Haiku XIV
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2013 6:40pm
So honest and moving. You have developed "I" and "you" without going in to much detail. This Haiku yet short, is very telling and moving. Great write.
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re: Re: Haiku XIV
jagracia
23rd Jul 2013 6:41pm
Glad you like it. Thanks.
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Re: Haiku XIV
dartford
(Paul S...)
23rd Jul 2013 8:06pm
You just keep putting
the precise word in
it's precise place...
which is sort of
brilliant, really!
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re: Re: Haiku XIV
jagracia
- Edited 23rd Jul 2013 8:17pm
23rd Jul 2013 8:12pm
I don't post all the poems I write, so the "brilliance" is somewhat skewed in my favor.
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re: re: Re: Haiku XIV
dartford
(Paul S...)
23rd Jul 2013 8:30pm
Oh I think brilliance
can stand a little
manipulation..
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Re: Haiku XIV
myamberdog
29th Jul 2013 10:24pm
excellent - I'd say I really really like about every other Haiku you do, Boo Boo!!!!!!!!!
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re: Re: Haiku XIV
jagracia
- Edited 29th Jul 2013 10:28pm
29th Jul 2013 10:27pm
My goal is to write Haiku's so you'll like all of them!
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