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The sensual garden
We fell into the blissful garden
tracing trails, edging the path
overlying hedges cleared away
the air blew sticky sweet
as a bird opens her wings
whispering nature, lovely doves, flowers in spring
A grown oak climbs between petals
reaching for bliss, touching sky
Wild flower petals swell
as mist kisses trickle within
Succulent sounds signal softened secure sacrament
wild beasts tangle and clash breathing Eden
Storms build, Thunder roars and rumbles
thickened air is split asunder
as cracks streak over
Waves pulse in quaking ferocity
streams overflowing gush floods the plain
the garden covers,hidden bliss resting peacefully
Published 23rd Jul 2013
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23rd Jul 2013 3:52am
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2013 4:01am
Truly beautiful. Bonne chance, cher.
23rd Jul 2013 5:09am
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23rd Jul 2013 6:27am
Mist kisses trickles within- fav line
Great write Bro. Soul!!
Amazing piece!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write Bro. Soul!!
Amazing piece!!
Sir Lancelott
23rd Jul 2013 10:22am
23rd Jul 2013 2:20pm
Anonymous
23rd Jul 2013 10:38am
Simply a delight to read, a poem of, from and for the senses! Good luck with the comp, Soul!
23rd Jul 2013 2:21pm
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23rd Jul 2013 4:30pm
:) Thank You Dear Red-It was my attempt- I am Honoured if YOU say i did well--Appreciated Red!!!
23rd Jul 2013 4:13pm
Soul this poem is so delightful and beautiful thank you.. good luck in the comp. peace Crim :)
23rd Jul 2013 4:31pm
26th Jul 2013 9:11am
A lovely poem, uplifting with the
captivating imagery setting a stage
and a scene.
Very well written.
captivating imagery setting a stage
and a scene.
Very well written.
26th Jul 2013 4:20pm
