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Just Enjoy
We need to slow down and meditate for a minute,
It's not fair about how we are living, it's all about the money we get spinning,
Would it not be better to live from the beginning,
No laws, no hate and no sadness,
Before this will turn all into madness,
We need to sit back, relax and enjoy our life,
Instead of stabbing eachother with a knife.
It's not fair about how we are living, it's all about the money we get spinning,
Would it not be better to live from the beginning,
No laws, no hate and no sadness,
Before this will turn all into madness,
We need to sit back, relax and enjoy our life,
Instead of stabbing eachother with a knife.
Published 21st Jul 2013
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27th Jul 2013 1:05am
Very good perspective! I like it alot. Great use of scheme. However, the last 2 lines don't rhyme or correspond well. Which leads me to my question, do you have a native language that isn't english? Because some of the words you use here, you don't use correctly, and when I read it, I detect an accent.
