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20th Jul 2013 4:54pm
I'm moving into the erotic direction ... haikuwise :-)! Lovely comment for which I thank you so much!!
Anonymous
20th Jul 2013 4:59pm
Very nice, delicate, and has a
sensual feel...
sensual feel...
20th Jul 2013 5:22pm
Anonymous
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20th Jul 2013 5:00pm
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Glad you stopped by to read the haiku! I much appreciate your comment! Thank you! A real Basketball Phrase? I didn't know that!
20th Jul 2013 9:49pm
her wings brush my lips
her hair falls over my cheeks
love takes flight again
thanks, chiyo....
her hair falls over my cheeks
love takes flight again
thanks, chiyo....
20th Jul 2013 10:53pm
Anonymous
20th Jul 2013 11:18pm
"Don't rebound," indeed! :)
Great haiku, Iris. Imaginative, thought provoking & love the pic, too.
*Peace* Carlene
Great haiku, Iris. Imaginative, thought provoking & love the pic, too.
*Peace* Carlene
20th Jul 2013 11:55pm
