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Haiku V
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Haiku V
one heartbeat from death
your breathing so slow and deep
one heartbeat from you
Written by
jagracia
Published
19th Jul 2013
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Re: Haiku V
myamberdog
19th Jul 2013 7:03pm
Yes!!!!!!!
last crust of bread
I kiss the crumb on your lips
I will miss you friend
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re: Re: Haiku V
jagracia
19th Jul 2013 7:20pm
Haikuish response. excellent!
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Re: Haiku V
dartford
(Paul S...)
20th Jul 2013 00:27am
That's another
technically &
emotionally achieved
haiku..lots of people try
them, but only the best
master them. That's
you, by the way..
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re: Re: Haiku V
jagracia
20th Jul 2013 2:02am
D, your praise does wonders for my self-esteem. Thanks for all your insights and observations.
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