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Longing
I miss you
like the bee the flower,
like the flower the caresses
of the bee’s gentle wings
like the bee the flower,
like the flower the caresses
of the bee’s gentle wings
Published 19th Jul 2013
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Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 5:01pm
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19th Jul 2013 6:32pm
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 5:07pm
Very pretty, a delicate interlude:)
19th Jul 2013 6:33pm
19th Jul 2013 8:20pm
A gracefully composed poem about symbiosis. Do you wish to be the bee or the flower? Really lovely.
Chi
Chi
19th Jul 2013 8:25pm
19th Jul 2013 8:35pm
20th Jul 2013 00:15am
The 'gentle' before 'wings'
makes it, for me. Your
word selection is so
well chosen..
makes it, for me. Your
word selection is so
well chosen..
20th Jul 2013 2:01am
20th Jul 2013 9:21pm
This is a beautiful write. Even though it's short, it conveys a wealth of emotion.
20th Jul 2013 10:42pm
