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Haiku III

I looked at her
the stars all aligned and bright
sighed �then awoke

Written by jagracia

Published 19th Jul 2013

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Re: Haiku III

19th Jul 2013 9:17am

Wonderfully penned, jagracia! That's an entire story by itself.
Chi

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19th Jul 2013 4:35pm

Indeed, a very short story. :)

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Re: Haiku III

Anonymous

19th Jul 2013 9:38am

Less is more, less words, more meaning!
Great lines!

19th Jul 2013 4:36pm

Thank you.

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Re: Haiku III

Anonymous

19th Jul 2013 3:22pm

...and so dreams are made of

- Edited 19th Jul 2013 6:37pm

19th Jul 2013 4:36pm

...sweet dreams are made of this, who am I to disagree...

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Anonymous

19th Jul 2013 4:48pm

ONE of my favorite songs;)

19th Jul 2013 6:35pm

...I travel the world and the seven seas
Everybody's looking for something...

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