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Unchained
Your words aren’t meant for me
your embrace’s just for her.
Deep in your heart
you grieve for her
the one
you love
much more than me.
For hers is your smile
your memory.
Behind your lids
you picture her
the one
you want
much more than me.
Hers is the name you cry
when finally you come.
Mine will be the moment
when I‘m unchained and gone.
your embrace’s just for her.
Deep in your heart
you grieve for her
the one
you love
much more than me.
For hers is your smile
your memory.
Behind your lids
you picture her
the one
you want
much more than me.
Hers is the name you cry
when finally you come.
Mine will be the moment
when I‘m unchained and gone.
Published 18th Jul 2013
| Edited 1st Sep 2014
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18th Jul 2013 11:15pm
This is poignant with a glint of hope at the end where the speaker might finally break free. There's nothing more painful than to care about someone who is always wishing for another.
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Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 9:18am
A recipe for heartbreak in a relationship, indeed. A moving, heartfelt write, Iris. I really like the expression & flow in this piece. Well done! :)
*Peace* Carlene
*Peace* Carlene
19th Jul 2013 9:26am
If there's no other way, the only way you can survive is to leave. There's always a moment where your instinct of self preservation has to kick in. Thanks for your lovely words, Carlene! Much appreciated!
19th Jul 2013 11:53am
So sad this is... Yea, I'm a lil more familiar with this than I'd like to be... Smh, life how very trying on a soul huh?
Excellent emotive ink my friend
Excellent emotive ink my friend
19th Jul 2013 11:56am
Sad that you're familiar with it. For you I wish all the best and a happy ending some day! Thanks for your lovely comment, dear.
