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Alone
I knew but you did not
I spoke but you did not
I lay awake while you slept
I saw no one in the crowd
I grieved because I could not
feel your joy
I spoke but you did not
I lay awake while you slept
I saw no one in the crowd
I grieved because I could not
feel your joy
Published 18th Jul 2013
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18th Jul 2013 9:19pm
18th Jul 2013 9:28pm
Thanks for your comments. I captured this poem during a melancholy moment, that came and went.
18th Jul 2013 10:51pm
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19th Jul 2013 4:29am
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- Edited 19th Jul 2013 1:49am
19th Jul 2013 00:24am
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19th Jul 2013 4:30am
All us lonely guys feel it all too well. But, G. just keep writing and you will never be alone.
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