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Observational Poems
Haiku VIII
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Haiku VIII
Rosebuds' blushing hearts
Won’t bear cascading outpour
Rain is killing fast
Written by
Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
Published
18th Jul 2013
| Edited
31st Aug 2013
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Re: Haiku VIII
jagracia
18th Jul 2013 7:13pm
The force of nature on the delicate. Lovely Haiku.
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
18th Jul 2013 8:27pm
Those words from you, master of the "short stories", make me really glad! Thanks a lot!
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Re: Haiku VIII
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 9:46am
This is a good haiku and contains two opposites , the roses being delicate and soft and the rain being like a more destructive dark force.
Much enjoyed!
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
19th Jul 2013 9:50am
So glad you enjoyed it, Mourganna! Thank you! We had so much rain during the last weeks, all my roses were suffering ... That inspired me :-).
Chi
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Re: Haiku VIII
Poetikmind
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19th Jul 2013 11:33am
Graphic imagery of nature, an excellent ink!
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
19th Jul 2013 11:40am
And an excellent comment, dear poetikmind! Thanks for that!
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Re: Haiku VIII
Anonymous
19th Jul 2013 9:13pm
Beautiful imagery & wonderful haiku, Iris. Much enjoyed the read! :)
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
19th Jul 2013 9:18pm
Much enjoyed your lovely comment, Carlene! Thank you!
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