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Haiku II

You float to the surface � � �
� �of my thoughts � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �
� � I hold you � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � � �
� � � my love is buoyant � � �

jagracia

Written by jagracia

Published 18th Jul 2013

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Re: Haiku II

dartford (Paul S...)

18th Jul 2013 1:10am

You have done it
again. A great poem.

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18th Jul 2013 1:55am

A little luck, modest skill.

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Re: Haiku II

Chiyo (Miss Chi)

18th Jul 2013 7:57am

Oh yes, that's an excellent love Haiku from the first line to the last. Glad your're in that stuff, too. MORE!
Chi

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