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Alone, Not Lonely
I revel in the joyous laughter
of the happy crowds
I smile with joy
When I hear
cacophony of sounds
I walk with the wind
against my face
touches of drizzles
on my body
Walking alone
I hear the warbling birds
I see fluttering butterflies
I touch falling leaves
I walk on bubbling brooks
Alone, yet I am whole
I am alone
But not lonely
I am solitary
But not unloved
In my heart and soul.
of the happy crowds
I smile with joy
When I hear
cacophony of sounds
I walk with the wind
against my face
touches of drizzles
on my body
Walking alone
I hear the warbling birds
I see fluttering butterflies
I touch falling leaves
I walk on bubbling brooks
Alone, yet I am whole
I am alone
But not lonely
I am solitary
But not unloved
In my heart and soul.
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Re: Alone, Not Lonely
17th Jul 2013 3:52pm
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17th Jul 2013 3:54pm
Thank you dear Red, so kind of you. This was inspired by a question someone asked me today.
Re: Alone, Not Lonely
17th Jul 2013 4:04pm
re: Re: Alone, Not Lonely
18th Jul 2013 1:54am
Re: Alone, Not Lonely
17th Jul 2013 4:11pm
re: Re: Alone, Not Lonely
18th Jul 2013 1:52am
Thank you Soul...loneliness is always there even in crowds, but alone is not isolation. I think.:)
Re: Alone, Not Lonely
17th Jul 2013 4:17pm
love the word cacophony
i have moments just as this. it's lovely.
perhaps for consideration.. drizzles may not need to be plural..
and perhaps you walk 'by' bubbling brooks
your words were very gentle.. i felt the moment with you. thank you for writing
i have moments just as this. it's lovely.
perhaps for consideration.. drizzles may not need to be plural..
and perhaps you walk 'by' bubbling brooks
your words were very gentle.. i felt the moment with you. thank you for writing
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re: Re: Alone, Not Lonely
18th Jul 2013 1:53am
I walk on the brooks, ankle deep in water, dear Komier. :D thank you so much for your kind comments.
Re: Alone, Not Lonely
Anonymous
17th Jul 2013 5:03pm
Just beautiful, as always
Thank you for a good read
Kitty
Thank you for a good read
Kitty

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re: Re: Alone, Not Lonely
18th Jul 2013 2:02am
Re: Alone, Not Lonely
17th Jul 2013 5:35pm
Exactly the kind of alone I have Grace, I am more alone than lonely.
A wonderful write dear.
A wonderful write dear.
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re: Re: Alone, Not Lonely
18th Jul 2013 2:05am
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Anonymous
17th Jul 2013 5:44pm
Lovely

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Re: Alone, Not Lonely
Anonymous
17th Jul 2013 11:24pm
Beautiful write grace...so true!

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re: Re: Alone, Not Lonely
18th Jul 2013 2:06am
Re: Alone, Not Lonely
18th Jul 2013 1:24am
This is me right now at this moment in my life. Thank you for summing it all up. Thank you for removing some of my fog.
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18th Jul 2013 2:07am