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Love story: the beginning
By Souladareatease and Grace
Juliet :
Caress my cheeks o gentle lover
Deliver ode to my beauty
Flatter me with thine eyes
O’ Gentle sir across the room
Hark, he hears me
Cross he now the room
What manner shall I embrace
to catch his gentle heart
Romeo:
Doe eyes that beckon me near
soft fay with flowing hair
dare catch thy sweet perfume
O to thee I must rush
Sounds within are astir
songs rapture witness Her
how do I capture such
headlong in a loving plunge
Juliet:
Pray sir, say unto me
What brought thee
With thy bold eyes
thou anger my brothers
For thou art of Montague
And I a Capulet
Shall thou dare thy head
Against my heart
Romeo:
I have come to seek
My true love fair
with eyes of rapture
lips for deepened pleasure
to make thee a Montague
wrapped one with thee
we shall caress the nights
and our glorious days
Juliet:
O heart be still
Against his words
O Romeo let us pledge
To meet again
Seventh hour on the seventh day
To tryst to declare our love
No Capulet nor Montague
It shall be thou, thee and thine!!
(**This poem copies the storyline of the original story. The conversations however are created with the sole purpose of developing our own poetic creativity. Apologies to purists.**)
Juliet :
Caress my cheeks o gentle lover
Deliver ode to my beauty
Flatter me with thine eyes
O’ Gentle sir across the room
Hark, he hears me
Cross he now the room
What manner shall I embrace
to catch his gentle heart
Romeo:
Doe eyes that beckon me near
soft fay with flowing hair
dare catch thy sweet perfume
O to thee I must rush
Sounds within are astir
songs rapture witness Her
how do I capture such
headlong in a loving plunge
Juliet:
Pray sir, say unto me
What brought thee
With thy bold eyes
thou anger my brothers
For thou art of Montague
And I a Capulet
Shall thou dare thy head
Against my heart
Romeo:
I have come to seek
My true love fair
with eyes of rapture
lips for deepened pleasure
to make thee a Montague
wrapped one with thee
we shall caress the nights
and our glorious days
Juliet:
O heart be still
Against his words
O Romeo let us pledge
To meet again
Seventh hour on the seventh day
To tryst to declare our love
No Capulet nor Montague
It shall be thou, thee and thine!!
(**This poem copies the storyline of the original story. The conversations however are created with the sole purpose of developing our own poetic creativity. Apologies to purists.**)
Published 14th Jul 2013
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Anonymous
14th Jul 2013 2:22pm
Turned out just lovely
Good write
Pleasurable read
Peace
Kitty
Good write
Pleasurable read
Peace
Kitty
14th Jul 2013 2:29pm
Thanks dear Kitty for your constant encouragement. You have always been supportive and positive in all your comments...Hugs!!
14th Jul 2013 2:43pm
14th Jul 2013 2:51pm
Thank you for being with me and lending me your talents in all the collaborations. Its an honour to work with you as always.
Anonymous
14th Jul 2013 3:39pm
another serene and lovely work from you two :-) nice work
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14th Jul 2013 5:43pm
I love this so much. It's so clever and so well done. Shakespeare himself would be proud of you.
14th Jul 2013 8:54pm
Anonymous
15th Jul 2013 3:36am
You two rule with these!!!
Bravo....
Bravo....
15th Jul 2013 4:26am
Anonymous
17th Jul 2013 10:45am
Like Deathpuppy said, Shakespeare would be proud.
17th Jul 2013 3:15pm
