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Moment Of Sanity
Looking through pictures
that have been categorized in my mind
before they are torn and burnt to ash
Darkness falls upon my soul
as words are spoken to me
wrapping my mind around them
numb embrace expressionless face
mute words slip across my lips...
Bittersweet moments
tear down the wall ripping apart my soul
crushing the very core to dust.
© Dawn Gordon 2013
that have been categorized in my mind
before they are torn and burnt to ash
Darkness falls upon my soul
as words are spoken to me
wrapping my mind around them
numb embrace expressionless face
mute words slip across my lips...
Bittersweet moments
tear down the wall ripping apart my soul
crushing the very core to dust.
© Dawn Gordon 2013
Published 13th Jul 2013
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Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 10:42am
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16th Jul 2013 11:01am
Awe my dear Gabriel :) always an honor to read beautiful comments from you. Muah mi amor
11th Dec 2013 3:26am
Oh my god, the imagery intense n the emotion
heartwrenchingly moving... Excellent ink lady :)
heartwrenchingly moving... Excellent ink lady :)
11th Dec 2013 4:07am
6th Feb 2014 5:21am
Awesome write sweets!!
Pleasure too read!!
Keep that pen swinging!!!
Sir Lancelott
Pleasure too read!!
Keep that pen swinging!!!
Sir Lancelott
24th Jul 2014 8:04pm
Hurtful memories of the past come to rekindle the pain. Burn and bury them and dig them up no more. Enjoyed.
22nd Jul 2020 1:23am
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14th Jul 2021 5:07pm
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18th Oct 2024 8:39pm
Pain like that can go on for many years if we let it. It's like throwing a can of black paint inside our hearts and having to live with it.
I've had it, Sometimes I still do.
I've had it, Sometimes I still do.
22nd Oct 2024 8:16pm
