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fragmented, poetic
under shadows of dawn
scarlet twisted & numb
this is where he left me
burning in embers of love, vintage
where autumn weeps
unhinged in a raven's sigh
silent..
& fire white
scarlet twisted & numb
this is where he left me
burning in embers of love, vintage
where autumn weeps
unhinged in a raven's sigh
silent..
& fire white
Published 1st Dec 2010
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1st Dec 2010 12:54pm
I will re-christen this as " fragmented, romantic"...You write so genuinely romantic and I am a big fan of you!
1st Dec 2010 12:58pm
This is so beautiful in it's simplicity Kandice; I love how you paint these mesmerizing images with your words... I too am a big fan! :)
1st Dec 2010 3:45pm
1st Dec 2010 6:32pm
You say so much, and cause the reader to feel so much, with so few words... A skill I can only hope to master one day.
