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the rain falls slow
as though it has all the time
in the
world
and
it sloppily kisses my skin
leaving drops of water
evidence of my love with the storm
as though it has all the time
in the
world
and
it sloppily kisses my skin
leaving drops of water
evidence of my love with the storm
Published 11th Jul 2013
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5th Nov 2013 10:27am
12th Dec 2013 11:33pm
poems can always be edited. getting the sense
right, now that's the hard part.
loved the sentiment expressed here...
right, now that's the hard part.
loved the sentiment expressed here...
9th Sep 2018 4:12pm
Despite the other comments I quite liked this I think it said all that needed to be sometimes short poems are the best.
