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behind waterfalls
behind the veil of waterfall
inset a cove with painted walls
crystalline drips amid foggy mist
trickle in cavernous sound
I found myself there
many moon glows ago, drifting
mixing, ochre, spit and blood
painting turkeys, other birds we know
smoothing stones to cascading falls
developing images scene through the years
take shape to things held dear
the once crudely lain now thick painted glaze
leavings that stain layer upon layer
As the blacken top bakes ashen past
the center of it all roars the fiery core
that no matter what stays there claims change
in embracement I stake my cave
one painting at a time
inset a cove with painted walls
crystalline drips amid foggy mist
trickle in cavernous sound
I found myself there
many moon glows ago, drifting
mixing, ochre, spit and blood
painting turkeys, other birds we know
smoothing stones to cascading falls
developing images scene through the years
take shape to things held dear
the once crudely lain now thick painted glaze
leavings that stain layer upon layer
As the blacken top bakes ashen past
the center of it all roars the fiery core
that no matter what stays there claims change
in embracement I stake my cave
one painting at a time
Published 9th Jul 2013
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 00:54am
Loving this scene more than I can tell you. Words of beauty, cher.
9th Jul 2013 1:43am
9th Jul 2013 00:58am
Your pen is captivating! Love your mind friend!
Beautiful painted waterfalls...Xo
Beautiful painted waterfalls...Xo
9th Jul 2013 1:42am
9th Jul 2013 1:40am
Oh yes...one painting at a time is good. Staking up a claim eh. Enjoyed the read, Soul.
9th Jul 2013 1:41am
Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 2:49am
Really cool write soul....
9th Jul 2013 2:56am
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9th Jul 2013 5:09am
Awwwww Dear Mae such a sweet thing to say--smile indeed I do-Thank You so much!!!
9th Jul 2013 8:04am
A wonderful write about so long ago, love the pic and the fascinating story told. :)
9th Jul 2013 4:14pm
Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 10:38am
loved this all the way..many moon glows ago..lovely work, soula :-)
9th Jul 2013 4:15pm
11th Jul 2013 3:00pm
This induces at least this reader to reflect on human history especially the pace of life. At least two levels to take this work.
12th Jul 2013 4:47am
12th Jul 2013 7:27pm
crystalline drips amid foggy mist
trickle in cavernous sound
I found myself there
many moon glows ago, drifting
mixing, ochre, spit and blood
^^Especially liked this bit.
Incredible writing :)
trickle in cavernous sound
I found myself there
many moon glows ago, drifting
mixing, ochre, spit and blood
^^Especially liked this bit.
Incredible writing :)
12th Jul 2013 8:51pm
