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delete
may i erase you from my life...
your existence is haunting my mind...
some songs you played i deleted...
some words you spoke i stopped speaking...
may i erase you from my life...
your existence is haunting my mind...
wishful thinking is the phrase needed here...
your death would only please me to the full...
may i erase you from my life...
your existence is haunting my mind...
if you don't use suicide as a way out...
i'm sure we could work something out...
may i erase you from my life...
your existence is haunting my mind...
just leave this world and take the memories with you...
amnesia to the brain so i can never remember...
may i erase you from my life...
your existence is haunting my mind...
say farewell forever my ex tormentor...
you will never be seen again...
may i erase you from my life...
your existence is haunting my mind...
your existence is haunting my mind...
some songs you played i deleted...
some words you spoke i stopped speaking...
may i erase you from my life...
your existence is haunting my mind...
wishful thinking is the phrase needed here...
your death would only please me to the full...
may i erase you from my life...
your existence is haunting my mind...
if you don't use suicide as a way out...
i'm sure we could work something out...
may i erase you from my life...
your existence is haunting my mind...
just leave this world and take the memories with you...
amnesia to the brain so i can never remember...
may i erase you from my life...
your existence is haunting my mind...
say farewell forever my ex tormentor...
you will never be seen again...
may i erase you from my life...
your existence is haunting my mind...
Published 28th Nov 2010
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30th Nov 2010 8:21am
i'm guessing this is about your ex-boyfriend who hurt you in so many ways...hmm..well what can i say...i'm stunned. it's dark yet subtle.
the repetition of this line "may i erase you from my life... your existence is haunting my mind..." screams out what you want your readers to understand right? that you're wanting the memories you have of your ex-boyfriend to die off with him too. congratulations on another eerie poem. simply love it :) xxx
the repetition of this line "may i erase you from my life... your existence is haunting my mind..." screams out what you want your readers to understand right? that you're wanting the memories you have of your ex-boyfriend to die off with him too. congratulations on another eerie poem. simply love it :) xxx
30th Nov 2010 6:47pm
you guessed right and thank you for spending your time to read and comment on my work once again x
2nd Dec 2010 1:01am
my mind has tortured me many times over the years just like that...it would be nice if we could erase certain memories from our minds
2nd Dec 2010 9:31am
i agree, i'd love to erase many memories...thank you for reading and commenting x
2nd Dec 2010 10:13am
Thank you for writing this. You have expressed something that I would like to say to my own personal demon. You put into words what I have tried to for most of my life. If only they could know...
2nd Dec 2010 7:52pm
