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lite end of thee funnel ~ A Sermonette ~Tragedies of Believe ~
syphon dowwwwn,[no
splishysplash n'ow]
funneling
heartsoulholemind
to lowest com
on denominator.like
7thgrade math[class]
it
all just happ'd as would
a thrillkill, senseless,yes...but
occurring ev'y blood-day
of Our unkindly humankind......
every body
gotta die every
body gotta die....o, thee
you of me
humanhuman mindless hyper'intelligence/
superior species calculant contriving,
contrivial self'sorb'd solutions,
Belief is In Thy Blood, Mr.Man,or
such is it said by thee/thy[yOur]thinkity
Brain
belief'd'lusion selfmakin human hemorrhage
since egoprehistoria
....& no no no
us vs them about it...(ah, sweeteXcuse,
this helly baked reallyfake duality!
g'odd bless&keep all y'alls In Eternal Foreverness/
[o,me'bullzhit,b'lessed Be]
xxxvDkzK2013mmmmmpfhotogrf;dkzk;VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV
splishysplash n'ow]
funneling
heartsoulholemind
to lowest com
on denominator.like
7thgrade math[class]
it
all just happ'd as would
a thrillkill, senseless,yes...but
occurring ev'y blood-day
of Our unkindly humankind......
every body
gotta die every
body gotta die....o, thee
you of me
humanhuman mindless hyper'intelligence/
superior species calculant contriving,
contrivial self'sorb'd solutions,
Belief is In Thy Blood, Mr.Man,or
such is it said by thee/thy[yOur]thinkity
Brain
belief'd'lusion selfmakin human hemorrhage
since egoprehistoria
....& no no no
us vs them about it...(ah, sweeteXcuse,
this helly baked reallyfake duality!
g'odd bless&keep all y'alls In Eternal Foreverness/
[o,me'bullzhit,b'lessed Be]
xxxvDkzK2013mmmmmpfhotogrf;dkzk;VVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV
Published 4th Jul 2013
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5th Jul 2013 2:56am
fake blood is red, there must be some sort of duality going on here (or there)
anyway, just wanted to say hi, i've been off a while and will
do that some more. you continue to exhaust me with your output
i do try to read every 20th poem or so. still excellent.
as I've said before, i think you should try posting only two a week.
i'm not saying (and never did say) that you should write fewer poems,
of course not, you should write as many as you want.
i'm just saying you should only post two or three
a week.
i bet you'd be surprised at how interesting that would prove.
also, you'd have a lot more people reading your writing.
posting so many is taken as a form of disrespect
(as odd and irrational as that may sound).
if you can't choose, just flip a coin.
well, anyway, just thought i'd say that once more.
i will try to limit myself from saying this to once every three months.
ray
anyway, just wanted to say hi, i've been off a while and will
do that some more. you continue to exhaust me with your output
i do try to read every 20th poem or so. still excellent.
as I've said before, i think you should try posting only two a week.
i'm not saying (and never did say) that you should write fewer poems,
of course not, you should write as many as you want.
i'm just saying you should only post two or three
a week.
i bet you'd be surprised at how interesting that would prove.
also, you'd have a lot more people reading your writing.
posting so many is taken as a form of disrespect
(as odd and irrational as that may sound).
if you can't choose, just flip a coin.
well, anyway, just thought i'd say that once more.
i will try to limit myself from saying this to once every three months.
ray
rather cyber-naïve....are you sayin aye'm so dispopular 'cause i'm seen as a low-life spammer on the DUP system?
mercy me.....I don't know what to do....prior to DUP, eye had overwhelmed myself wit storage issues, & somehow lost track of 100's of irreplaceable masterworks, maybe 1000s- but all that can be considered exercise in 'Letting-Go', so to speak....DUP is the only place that keeps count, but counting really doesn't count for any thing....I have truly tried to limit The Flow of this crap, & many a'time, as with alcohol, thought i'd have to make self Stop Completely & never 'pick up' again, (one-da-atta-time,of course)....26 years clean&sober from drunk'n'dope, but this....aiyeee. My artistic intensity with this, & music, & photography is, in&of itself rather painful, but since the subtle, undiagnosable neurologic 'changes' that seemed to have had it's genesis in the 7-months of death defying Cardiac Adventures&Calamities with which I ushered in the New M'looneyum , the 'polarity', 'dualism' of such pain seems irrelevant........a mysteriously re'ordered(see: 'damaged') brain machine which has kinda been severed from whatever it was may have kept me 'in touch' with our consensus reality, paradoxical,+wildly self-contradictory though such 'norms' be. I know I 'was there' once, but I have no sense of what it felt like to have been 'alive' for the 48yrs of the 20thCentury.
There I go, overexposing m'self again.....
apologies for my overwhelmtion.... I cannot say that your suggestion hasn't occurred to me before. Many-a-time these last 12yrs, I've wished I could quit....
well, thank ye, & see ye around, (or now, maybe not)& thank ye again
mercy me.....I don't know what to do....prior to DUP, eye had overwhelmed myself wit storage issues, & somehow lost track of 100's of irreplaceable masterworks, maybe 1000s- but all that can be considered exercise in 'Letting-Go', so to speak....DUP is the only place that keeps count, but counting really doesn't count for any thing....I have truly tried to limit The Flow of this crap, & many a'time, as with alcohol, thought i'd have to make self Stop Completely & never 'pick up' again, (one-da-atta-time,of course)....26 years clean&sober from drunk'n'dope, but this....aiyeee. My artistic intensity with this, & music, & photography is, in&of itself rather painful, but since the subtle, undiagnosable neurologic 'changes' that seemed to have had it's genesis in the 7-months of death defying Cardiac Adventures&Calamities with which I ushered in the New M'looneyum , the 'polarity', 'dualism' of such pain seems irrelevant........a mysteriously re'ordered(see: 'damaged') brain machine which has kinda been severed from whatever it was may have kept me 'in touch' with our consensus reality, paradoxical,+wildly self-contradictory though such 'norms' be. I know I 'was there' once, but I have no sense of what it felt like to have been 'alive' for the 48yrs of the 20thCentury.
There I go, overexposing m'self again.....
apologies for my overwhelmtion.... I cannot say that your suggestion hasn't occurred to me before. Many-a-time these last 12yrs, I've wished I could quit....
well, thank ye, & see ye around, (or now, maybe not)& thank ye again
"rather cyber-naïve....are you sayin aye'm so dispopular 'cause i'm seen as a low-life spammer on the DUP system?"
No, not a spammer. I should never have said:
"posting so many is taken as a form of disrespect"
I should have said:
"posting so many makes it harder for people to
follow the poem listings of the other people they follow"
What I said was too extreme. I love your writing and
am willing to look through my list, it's not that much of a
problem; anybody who loves your writing is more than willing
to do the same.
Also I see your point about storing your poems so you don't loose them.
I can REALLY understand that and hadn't thought of that.
will change:
"i will try to limit myself from saying this to once every three months."
to:
"i'm going to stop worrying you about this; it isn't near as important
as that you keep writing. i can see that what i said could be seen as a
discouragement and none of us need that.
overly bitchy ray :) (or some such silly, endearing symbol)
p.s. "overexposing m'self again" is fine with me; i never get tired
of hearing about interesting lives.
p.p.s. not that i'd ever let an emotion affect my
rigorously logical processes; but, yes, now that i
mention it, there's an almost infinitesimal probability
that my august judgment may, by a tiny, actually
eenie weenie extent, be nudged, by the length of
the merest atom of distance, towards that vast
destroyer of souls: envy.
No, not a spammer. I should never have said:
"posting so many is taken as a form of disrespect"
I should have said:
"posting so many makes it harder for people to
follow the poem listings of the other people they follow"
What I said was too extreme. I love your writing and
am willing to look through my list, it's not that much of a
problem; anybody who loves your writing is more than willing
to do the same.
Also I see your point about storing your poems so you don't loose them.
I can REALLY understand that and hadn't thought of that.
will change:
"i will try to limit myself from saying this to once every three months."
to:
"i'm going to stop worrying you about this; it isn't near as important
as that you keep writing. i can see that what i said could be seen as a
discouragement and none of us need that.
overly bitchy ray :) (or some such silly, endearing symbol)
p.s. "overexposing m'self again" is fine with me; i never get tired
of hearing about interesting lives.
p.p.s. not that i'd ever let an emotion affect my
rigorously logical processes; but, yes, now that i
mention it, there's an almost infinitesimal probability
that my august judgment may, by a tiny, actually
eenie weenie extent, be nudged, by the length of
the merest atom of distance, towards that vast
destroyer of souls: envy.
7th Jul 2013 4:34am
thank ye so much for clarificating & honesty.....
communication with you/from you, has been among the "best things" I've gotten out of DUP.
"envy" is interesting....you're not the only 'artist' who has been attracted to, then overwhelmed by some kind of intensity in my stuff. I've had so many admirers 'disappear'....mostly musicians, & Unitarian Universalist ministers & congregationists with whom I've impressed deeply with tales of the psychic "spiritual" changes that have ensued since my death defiant affairs of cardiac & metaphoric 'heart' in this 21st century....
anyway, it's refreshing to hear someone admit & try to explain the seemingly subconscious dis-ease that I seem to effect (?infect?,ha!)people with........
g'odd bless ye Ray.....I deeply value your cyberself.......
communication with you/from you, has been among the "best things" I've gotten out of DUP.
"envy" is interesting....you're not the only 'artist' who has been attracted to, then overwhelmed by some kind of intensity in my stuff. I've had so many admirers 'disappear'....mostly musicians, & Unitarian Universalist ministers & congregationists with whom I've impressed deeply with tales of the psychic "spiritual" changes that have ensued since my death defiant affairs of cardiac & metaphoric 'heart' in this 21st century....
anyway, it's refreshing to hear someone admit & try to explain the seemingly subconscious dis-ease that I seem to effect (?infect?,ha!)people with........
g'odd bless ye Ray.....I deeply value your cyberself.......
