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this is powerful and stands alone quite well. I'd love to see it expanded to at least a verse-seems like there's much more to go along with it..even a few more lines, carefully chosen would make this extremely brilliant :-) welcome to DUP

Wow... Such power and emotion in such few words. The pain of losing someone, or being apart from someone takes its toll on the heart. This is well put. I really liked this, riyah!