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The Fireflies
He showed me the fireflies
Outside, in the garden
They flickered finely
Their bright sparks
Like dancing fire
On darkening
day, curtain
Floating
Softly on air
He said to me
“I will show to you
These lovely lights of
my hope in symbolic fire
Of all awesome needy want”
His strong commitment to fulfil
a promise he made ever long ago
to adhere to belief, unwavering quest
to bring the torch home, within his
family, all his domain, a kingdom
To rule within his spirit, a queen
I watched the fireflies flicker
Thanking him for his gifts
Cherishing the words
His mighty messages
His inspiring words
His prophecies
I feel small
Inadequate
Unworthy
But faith
Keeps me
Hopeful.
Outside, in the garden
They flickered finely
Their bright sparks
Like dancing fire
On darkening
day, curtain
Floating
Softly on air
He said to me
“I will show to you
These lovely lights of
my hope in symbolic fire
Of all awesome needy want”
His strong commitment to fulfil
a promise he made ever long ago
to adhere to belief, unwavering quest
to bring the torch home, within his
family, all his domain, a kingdom
To rule within his spirit, a queen
I watched the fireflies flicker
Thanking him for his gifts
Cherishing the words
His mighty messages
His inspiring words
His prophecies
I feel small
Inadequate
Unworthy
But faith
Keeps me
Hopeful.
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1st Jul 2013 1:17am
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1st Jul 2013 2:12am
Great photo and poem .You should find out who took it and e- mail them this poem .I bet they would love it just like I did.
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1st Jul 2013 2:24am
Good idea, deathpuppy. I will surely do that. Thanks for the idea and for reading.:D
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 3:36am
wow, nicely done grace...hope reigns!
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1st Jul 2013 1:54pm
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1st Jul 2013 5:58am
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 8:42am
A lovely story with lot's of truth in it..great visuals too :-) nice work, Grace :-)
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1st Jul 2013 1:55pm
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Anonymous
1st Jul 2013 1:56pm
Just beautiful
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1st Jul 2013 3:05pm
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2nd Jul 2013 1:11am
Faith My dear Red...yes sometimes that's all that we have. But when we have it, me can do a lot isnt it.
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1st Jul 2013 8:46pm
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2nd Jul 2013 1:12am
Dustyjjewels, you are very kind...and encouraging in your words. Thank You so much.
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