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Footprint Of The Devil
Infant heart
baby's blood
eat it
drink it
bulletproof
mindfuck
brainwashed
civil war...
baby's blood
eat it
drink it
bulletproof
mindfuck
brainwashed
civil war...
Published 27th Jun 2013
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27th Jun 2013 11:04pm
Serious issue here ... If I'm reading this right ... the use of children soldiers in civil war:
"Children are sometimes forced to commit terrible crimes, a 13-year-old boy tells that he was forced to cut the fetus out of the stomach of a pregnant woman with his bayonet. Another child was forced to drown people in latrines. Still another was forced to cut off the hands of a prisoner, because he had lost the keys to the handcuffs."
... Your stark use of a few words illuminates a dark most don't want to see.
Bravo!
"Children are sometimes forced to commit terrible crimes, a 13-year-old boy tells that he was forced to cut the fetus out of the stomach of a pregnant woman with his bayonet. Another child was forced to drown people in latrines. Still another was forced to cut off the hands of a prisoner, because he had lost the keys to the handcuffs."
... Your stark use of a few words illuminates a dark most don't want to see.
Bravo!
28th Jun 2013 7:09am
my favorite kind of poetry
elegant slamming of words
no critique here
i really love it!
elegant slamming of words
no critique here
i really love it!
