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POOR LITTLE THING
The D.N.A caught in your nails.
Numerous,different strands.
Silken flesh of cobwebs,
catching all the pests that get too near.
Distracted by those silver tears.
A cold metallic stare.
Amazed that you can still be called human.
Infected by your evolving venom.
Your insecurities,
in society.
Like a drop of blood,in shark infested waters.
You poor little thing...
Why are you surprised,when they tear you apart?
Numerous,different strands.
Silken flesh of cobwebs,
catching all the pests that get too near.
Distracted by those silver tears.
A cold metallic stare.
Amazed that you can still be called human.
Infected by your evolving venom.
Your insecurities,
in society.
Like a drop of blood,in shark infested waters.
You poor little thing...
Why are you surprised,when they tear you apart?
Published 25th Jun 2013
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26th Jun 2013 00:00am
Anonymous
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26th Jun 2013 2:23am
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Sorrowful, dark irony ...the society that she struggles desperately to defend herself against--falsely believing in her success--ultimately is that which results in her own destruction!
A unique depiction of the sinister truth in Life: In the end, those who are the 'strongest' survive...or is it that good does
n o t always triumph over evil.)
Well penned!!!
(enjoyed the 'image' of a spider that your poem created in my mind)
Enchantress
A unique depiction of the sinister truth in Life: In the end, those who are the 'strongest' survive...or is it that good does
n o t always triumph over evil.)
Well penned!!!
(enjoyed the 'image' of a spider that your poem created in my mind)
Enchantress
26th Jun 2013 7:05pm
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2013 1:09am
I think this one is great, awesome job, very vivid, it almost mocks, really cool write.
