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.DEAD temptation. part 1
crimson tears fall from scars,
[nothing left but open scars...]
no emotions left for the dead,
[no more breathing means she's dead...]
kill me slowly.
[kill me now...]
make me scream.
[save me how...]
watch me fall...
watch me collapse...
Into nothingness...
i couldn't last...
[nothing left but open scars...]
no emotions left for the dead,
[no more breathing means she's dead...]
kill me slowly.
[kill me now...]
make me scream.
[save me how...]
watch me fall...
watch me collapse...
Into nothingness...
i couldn't last...
Published 22nd Nov 2010
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30th Nov 2010 8:18am
ahh so they're in sections...just noticed silly me :D your rhyming is excellent throughout these dead temptation poems and are filled with so much pain, hatred, revengefulness and a longing to be free from bad memories. your writing style is inspirational and so dark. i love it sarah. i love your work and i shall continue stalking you until you release your book...even then i shall stalk you mwahaha ;) keep it up sarah and you'll be one of the masters of dark poetry :) xxx
30th Nov 2010 6:48pm
yes they're in sections launa :P
and thank you once again for reading and commenting :) even though you most likely read them in the wrong order, silly you :) xx
