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CLUBBIN' (You Looked Beautiful)
you wore a black dress, which shone
where it pressed against your skin
where it danced with a rhythmn
that was sensuous as film
amidst the haze & the scotch
and the flashing lights I watched
the silhouette of your thighs
drifting through the noise...
Published 23rd Jun 2013
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17th Jul 2013 6:49pm
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17th Jul 2013 10:56pm
That imbues the poem with even more significance. It changes the way I read it.
