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eye play only to thee
reflexion of thee
groundling
of me ownly ignore
ance
veiled in jellylike
obfuscance of
a truth-bearing
reality trixterr,
a realive
believe-you-me'ist ---
thee
easiest path to th'secure
under
standing [in]
commondenominated
allusions
(borne of lottsa'other
ah cute'lusions)
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reflexion of thee
groundling
of me ownly ignore
ance
veiled in jellylike
obfuscance of
a truth-bearing
reality trixterr,
a realive
believe-you-me'ist ---
thee
easiest path to th'secure
under
standing [in]
commondenominated
allusions
(borne of lottsa'other
ah cute'lusions)
xxxxdkzk2013xxpfoto;dkzk;XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Published 23rd Jun 2013
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23rd Jun 2013 7:50pm
very modernly titled. & EE Cummings is a prime poet in whose footsteps to follow. I always see his shadow in your playwerks. of his fans, I am 1 big...
23rd Jun 2013 7:57pm
thankyouJohn.....
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has'fluenced me more than Iyam conscious of.....
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has'fluenced me more than Iyam conscious of.....
23rd Jun 2013 9:57pm
24th Jun 2013 3:06am
24th Jun 2013 1:18pm
i too have noticed much Cummings in you dear Daniel....(errr perhaps that sounded wholly inappropriate, forgive me for i am poor at communication of thee english language) anywho a lovely rainbow in yer picture, near as lovely as your fine versifications. big ups and kudos as always mah brotha
24th Jun 2013 3:02pm
eye
read ee somewhat voraciously in hi-skool(along wit too many other perversive poots), but have only revisited him
most spooradically since
-tis holey appropriate, &flatattering to be perceived in such
such rarified company
grazie, kid
read ee somewhat voraciously in hi-skool(along wit too many other perversive poots), but have only revisited him
most spooradically since
-tis holey appropriate, &flatattering to be perceived in such
such rarified company
grazie, kid
