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The Wind...my love
Softly from behind she comes
at first just a little touch,
gently whispering in my ear
with a gust she rushes by
playfully nudging me forward
then with a sudden rush
she dances all around me...Woosh.
Whipping her fingers through my hair
rocking me,pulling me,pushing me
telling me where to go.
In the blink of an eye
a twist and a turn
not even a goodbye,
she's gone.
at first just a little touch,
gently whispering in my ear
with a gust she rushes by
playfully nudging me forward
then with a sudden rush
she dances all around me...Woosh.
Whipping her fingers through my hair
rocking me,pulling me,pushing me
telling me where to go.
In the blink of an eye
a twist and a turn
not even a goodbye,
she's gone.
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23rd Jun 2013 1:39pm
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23rd Jun 2013 3:31pm
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23rd Jun 2013 4:20pm
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 3:41pm
Perfect write! Love them, use them, then leave them. :)
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23rd Jun 2013 4:24pm
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 6:22pm
Beautiful, playful poem, love.
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23rd Jun 2013 10:58pm
Re: The Wind...my love
23rd Jun 2013 7:13pm
sometimes,,,love is as the wind that only comes once,,,never to return,,,,,,,,,,,cannaballester
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Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 10:15pm
It's not easy to say g'bye..it never is!
Beautiful...!!
Beautiful...!!
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23rd Jun 2013 11:01pm