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LOOSE ENDS
i don t like leaving
too many
put off
unfinished
unresolved
loose ends
laying around
nor behind
for the most part
perhaps
or maybe even
only because
i myself
have finally come
to more fully
more clearly
realize
that i too
am
one
Published 22nd Jun 2013
| Edited 8th Feb 2024
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2013 11:10am
Profound to be sure oin...
22nd Jun 2013 6:02pm
Thanks Strider!... I didn't come up with this to be a poem, it was just one of those random, free floating thoughts that popped into my head through my chattering mind one day & when I first heard it, it made me laugh, so I wrote it down to ponder more on later... When I did, I saw that it was corny & a little odd, but also very true in a number of ways, both literally & metaphorically, in regards to different aspects of my nature!... So at that point, I decided it worthy of my deeming it a poem!...
- OIN
- OIN
