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Though I'm smiling
I'm silently crying
Always hiding
Slowly dying
I'll attempt to hide
Can't show what's inside
Masks are worn for pride
While wounds are open wide
Your words cut into my skin
Pain seeping in
Enjoying this sweet sin
You just can't win
Because even if I die
Days will go by
And you'll ask yourself why
You never even saw me cry.
I'm silently crying
Always hiding
Slowly dying
I'll attempt to hide
Can't show what's inside
Masks are worn for pride
While wounds are open wide
Your words cut into my skin
Pain seeping in
Enjoying this sweet sin
You just can't win
Because even if I die
Days will go by
And you'll ask yourself why
You never even saw me cry.
Published 21st Jun 2013
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Anonymous
22nd Jun 2013 2:12am
Welcome to DU! This great, I know the feeling of smiling but not what is true in side. You have expressed it well. :)
22nd Jun 2013 2:22am
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23rd Jun 2013 4:35pm
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15th Aug 2013 4:29am
"Though I'm smiling
I'm silently crying
Always hiding
Slowly dying "
really enjoyed the way the intro flowed... a smile is a mask in itself for sure, props!
I'm silently crying
Always hiding
Slowly dying "
really enjoyed the way the intro flowed... a smile is a mask in itself for sure, props!
15th Aug 2013 10:24am
15th Aug 2013 1:34pm
17th Nov 2013 3:54pm
Holding it all inside is akin to a volcano
brimming, getting ready to erupt, never quite sure
when but when it does... There will be an incredible, powerful explosion... A sad n moving ink
brimming, getting ready to erupt, never quite sure
when but when it does... There will be an incredible, powerful explosion... A sad n moving ink
17th Nov 2013 8:16pm
30th Jan 2024 00:15am
Hello sweetdevil. Decided to go back to your 1st post, since you've been a part of DUP for quite sometime. This is a great piece of writing. Beautifully written, with emotion pouring out through the seams. Awesome!
1st Feb 2024 7:07am
Thank you. I haven't even seen this poem in so long. I am glad it is still enjoyed by readers!
