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Cooling Memories
Feeling the passion linger
laid out on humid afternoons.
Did I tire you out old man?
Arm lays heavy
Holding my attention
hand switched off
Resting
Nestled in gold chests
Leaning back
Did I tire you out old man?
The fan
It's silent revolution
The change in the air
Summer breeze
Blowing through
Sweating
Sticking
dries
cooling
Did I tire you out old man?
Remembering
movements
words
looks
peaking
In me
Feeling
Within
Mine
keeping
Did I tire you out old man?
I hope I didn't.
I'm making plans..
laid out on humid afternoons.
Did I tire you out old man?
Arm lays heavy
Holding my attention
hand switched off
Resting
Nestled in gold chests
Leaning back
Did I tire you out old man?
The fan
It's silent revolution
The change in the air
Summer breeze
Blowing through
Sweating
Sticking
dries
cooling
Did I tire you out old man?
Remembering
movements
words
looks
peaking
In me
Feeling
Within
Mine
keeping
Did I tire you out old man?
I hope I didn't.
I'm making plans..
Published 20th Jun 2013
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20th Jun 2013 5:45pm
about 20 edits and still not altogther happy with it
yes there is a reason for the "jumbled" words at the end
sometimes thoughts/memories we have dont always follow order, we remember snippets, and usually the best bits too, Our brains tend to be helpful in this regard and discard the not so good points
it's a jumble. her jumble of thoughts that she had :)
hope that explains it all hehe maybe not :)
yes there is a reason for the "jumbled" words at the end
sometimes thoughts/memories we have dont always follow order, we remember snippets, and usually the best bits too, Our brains tend to be helpful in this regard and discard the not so good points
it's a jumble. her jumble of thoughts that she had :)
hope that explains it all hehe maybe not :)
