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Missing Person
The slinky dress may tell a story
one of the reason for the svelte figure
the heels suggest the acknowledgment
of society's expectations for appeal
nails may denote a high level of grooming
the highlights set to dazzle all eyes
a necklace a sense of bling
and a fragrance sends signals to the brain
But I need to know where are you?
one of the reason for the svelte figure
the heels suggest the acknowledgment
of society's expectations for appeal
nails may denote a high level of grooming
the highlights set to dazzle all eyes
a necklace a sense of bling
and a fragrance sends signals to the brain
But I need to know where are you?
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Re: Missing Person
Anonymous
18th Jun 2013 11:04am
Still looking too jazz...nice write and deep
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18th Jun 2013 11:24am
Thanks buddy. Love the word "deep" for something rather short. My dad, who is on record for crafting one of the shortest masters theses in USC social work program, might be smiling now.
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Anonymous
18th Jun 2013 11:27am
I have thought similar things..i love how you put this! great write
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18th Jun 2013 11:34am
If you by chance have seen the movie Bobby, there is a scene between Martin Sheen and Helen Hunt that I stole the concept from.
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18th Jun 2013 12:08pm
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18th Jun 2013 12:15pm
Again you provide a comment I never would have thought of on my own. Thanks.
Re: Missing Person
18th Jun 2013 3:25pm
The Girl from Yesterday? Just before another 'Day in Paradise' for a man who has been through a 'Tequila Sunrise' recently she is Probably staying at the Hotel California.
Good write Jazz
Good write Jazz
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18th Jun 2013 6:24pm
Terry, anyone with a command of Eagles songbook like you have, will always be welcomed in my house! I must confess I am unfamiliar with the Eagles singing, "Day In Paradise". The Phil Collins tune?
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18th Jun 2013 7:40pm
HELL FREEZES OVER/[Title]Learn to to be still/[Ist line]Just another day in Paradise
Awe shucks I cheated a bit ;)
Awe shucks I cheated a bit ;)
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18th Jun 2013 11:08pm
Fiction based on reality via a movie sparks my rambling! Thank you for giving me some of your time.
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18th Jun 2013 11:10pm
The music in my head may resemble Handel but there is some interference when it reaches my pen!
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20th Jun 2013 2:20am
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- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
21st Jun 2013 12:57pm
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