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Hard Slow Rain
You drip from the stubble on my chin
As I move up to nestle close
Licking yourself from my sweetened mouth
The want grasping, pulling me nearer.
Easily full to overflowing, dripping more
Knowing I'm the harder for your taste
Deep the long intended grinding
Clutching throats to fight the pleasing.
Methodically paced and patient strokes
Revealing nerves never touched before
Whispering applause with lightened grips
You drip again from the hard slow rain.
As I move up to nestle close
Licking yourself from my sweetened mouth
The want grasping, pulling me nearer.
Easily full to overflowing, dripping more
Knowing I'm the harder for your taste
Deep the long intended grinding
Clutching throats to fight the pleasing.
Methodically paced and patient strokes
Revealing nerves never touched before
Whispering applause with lightened grips
You drip again from the hard slow rain.
Published 17th Jun 2013
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17th Jun 2013 8:12pm
17th Jun 2013 8:15pm
17th Jun 2013 8:37pm
17th Jun 2013 8:51pm
Never been accused if being classy, miss. I will take that as a compliment! Thank you.
17th Jun 2013 9:46pm
Love how it drips from your stubble!
And those untouched nerves...very nice!
And those untouched nerves...very nice!
17th Jun 2013 9:48pm
17th Jun 2013 10:02pm
17th Jun 2013 11:36pm
Anonymous
18th Jun 2013 1:03am
Very sexy and sensually done. Like it! Don't change a thing wrote it perfect. :)
18th Jun 2013 4:20am
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
18th Jun 2013 4:00am
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18th Jun 2013 4:21am
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
18th Jun 2013 8:01am
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18th Jun 2013 2:39pm
Anonymous
19th Jun 2013 10:23pm
Oh, this. Just yes!
Wonderful, sensual poem.
Wonderful, sensual poem.
19th Jun 2013 11:41pm
Anonymous
23rd Jun 2013 10:30pm
I will never think of rain the same way again ;)
Very nice, well done!
Very nice, well done!
24th Jun 2013 00:55am
