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Tidal Forces
I am the sand
and you are the tide
I feel you rolling out
leaving me behind
I wait
Soon you return
you are the sand
and I am the tide
I slip away
I return
to this ebb and flow
between you me
and you are the tide
I feel you rolling out
leaving me behind
I wait
Soon you return
you are the sand
and I am the tide
I slip away
I return
to this ebb and flow
between you me
Published 15th Jun 2013
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15th Jun 2013 5:50am
You could not have paid me a higher compliment. I cried when I wrote it. There is a sad story behind this poem as you can imagine. Thank you so much.
Anonymous
15th Jun 2013 10:57pm
Lovely..soft, gentle...realistic
feeling added to the words:)
feeling added to the words:)
15th Jun 2013 11:14pm
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- Edited 8th Oct 2022 2:45pm
17th Jun 2013 2:32pm
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17th Jun 2013 4:49pm
Thank you. I only wish I didn't have to feel so much pain to find those metaphors. Everything has a cost.
2nd May 2014 2:42am
When you move in parallels but opposite directions... the most painful, questionable love.
2nd May 2014 5:48pm
