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Jaded Love

She commands forces-
She demands sources-
To know where you're coming from-
She puts up fences-
And is always defensive-
Cause somebody's tore her down-
She needs more than just, "You're Pretty,"-
To give her assurance-
Cause long ago, someone told her that, but made her feel shitty-
She's been jilted by lying eyes-
Heard all the alibis-
So treat her good my friend, or she'll sever ties-
She's been broken-
She's been broken-
So you want get to far if you treat her wrong-
Cause she's done with hoping-
She needs a strong man-
Who understands-
One who'll be there, without needing a recompense-
True love once betrayed her-
She gave it-
Wasted it-
It never was returned to her again-
She commands forces-
She demands sources-
To know where you're coming from-
Written by hungrypan74 (Dantalyon)
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