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'Rare'
Drunk with eyes of desire
peeled back
from scorched pupil's sac
this baby burns beauty
so deep into my conscious
in fact, it's like she's got no scruples
suckin' out my love sac
but for real she's 'the reel that
one kiss would seal the deal
on the real it's what I feel..
sucklin' my scrumptious dream baby's beauty
how I'm lovin' that bouncin' booty in bunches
and, what my hunch is that she would
freely squirt me her tasty honey
now ain't it funny how my hot sexy baby
make me think of her as a sweet, yet fiery lady...?
peeled back
from scorched pupil's sac
this baby burns beauty
so deep into my conscious
in fact, it's like she's got no scruples
suckin' out my love sac
but for real she's 'the reel that
one kiss would seal the deal
on the real it's what I feel..
sucklin' my scrumptious dream baby's beauty
how I'm lovin' that bouncin' booty in bunches
and, what my hunch is that she would
freely squirt me her tasty honey
now ain't it funny how my hot sexy baby
make me think of her as a sweet, yet fiery lady...?
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Re: 'Rare'
14th Jun 2013 4:22am
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14th Jun 2013 5:13am
Excuse me? Is that a blatant insult?
Sorry if you suddenly don't find something g original... Can't win em all...thank u for ur thoughts
Sorry if you suddenly don't find something g original... Can't win em all...thank u for ur thoughts
re: re: Re: 'Rare'
14th Jun 2013 6:33am
No insult meant at all, actually a highly paid complement. The rarity referred to the sensual, not the original. You’re always original…… Take no offense.......
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14th Jun 2013 12:35pm
Well, if I misunderstood ur comment I apologize... N it's NOT I can't take criticism just when seems like a gratutitous
dig... lol anyways, sorry I thought it was insulting
dig... lol anyways, sorry I thought it was insulting
Re: 'Rare'
Anonymous
14th Jun 2013 5:29am
Rare, indeed, to find someone that is both. Lovely poem, cher.
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14th Jun 2013 12:36pm
Aaaawww YOU are rare sweetie pants lol thank u so much
I really appreciate you! :)
I really appreciate you! :)
Re: 'Rare'
14th Jun 2013 6:47am
Shhh.....I thought we were suppose to keep MY rarity on the low?! :)
Love it! Xo
Love it! Xo
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re: Re: 'Rare'
14th Jun 2013 12:38pm
Lmao! Me n my big mouth! lol thank you my friend, truly appreciate the laugh n support always! :)
Re: 'Rare'
14th Jun 2013 11:26am
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14th Jun 2013 12:41pm
Aaaawwww why thank you! hope you didn't singe yourself
reading it lol appreciate you muchly sweetheart :)
reading it lol appreciate you muchly sweetheart :)
Re: 'Rare'
14th Jun 2013 2:23pm
Daaayuuum ooooo you naaaasty! hahah this was sexy babes, check please!
Red
Red
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re: Re: 'Rare'
14th Jun 2013 4:35pm
"nasty boy, don't mean a thing" i can learn to like this" l.o.l. j.k... thank you my dear 'poetess ultimus' l.o.l.