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As I fall
I fall in slow motion from the heavens.
Down through the clouds I drift
and now I see them, people who look
at me as I fall. They all know me,
everyone of them. I fall faster than
I think. To them it's like lightning
from heaven. But they all know me
and they heard thunder before my fall.
Don't believe the lies about me.
I love you all.
Down through the clouds I drift
and now I see them, people who look
at me as I fall. They all know me,
everyone of them. I fall faster than
I think. To them it's like lightning
from heaven. But they all know me
and they heard thunder before my fall.
Don't believe the lies about me.
I love you all.
Published 14th Jun 2013
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14th Jun 2013 9:03pm
I fall faster than
I think. To them it's like lightning
from heaven. But they all know me
and they heard thunder before my fall.
Don't believe the lies about me.
I love you all.
This seems different from the rest of your darker poems,
I'm not sure if it's the style or the form.
One of my favorites from you, on the list!
I think. To them it's like lightning
from heaven. But they all know me
and they heard thunder before my fall.
Don't believe the lies about me.
I love you all.
This seems different from the rest of your darker poems,
I'm not sure if it's the style or the form.
One of my favorites from you, on the list!
